Let Me stay up with Shane

By Anonymous (not verified), 16 March, 2026
Let Me stay up with Shane I am 7 and I haf to go to bed at 8 but Shane is 9 and he has to go to bed at 9. Why don't I go to bed at 9. Then I can stay up and play. We will be better brothers to play to gether like you all ways say. So let me stay up with Shane. Pleas I love you.
Grade Level
Grade 2
Standards
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.2.1
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.2.5
Model Quality
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Completed Rubric
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Empty Rubric
/sites/default/files/2026-03/Persuasive_Rubric.docx
Mode
Persuasive Writing
Rubric Image Path
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Form
Persuasive Paragraph
Interactive Rubric

Persuasive Rubric

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Structure

  • The writing has a beginning, a middle, and an ending.
  • The order of reasons is convincing.

Ideas

  • The writing states an opinion about the topic.
  • Reasons support the opinion.
  • Sentences are easy to read.
  • The writing uses specific words.

Correctness

  • A capital letter begins each sentence and name.
  • Sentences end with correct punctuation.
  • Common words have correct spelling.

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