My Favorit Lake

By Anonymous (not verified), 16 March, 2026
My Favorit Lake Let me tell you about my favorit lake. The water is dark blue and the water feels cool. There is some yellow sand where kids can build cassels. Lots of people go there to swim. Some rowboats are there too. Sometimes people eat lunch by the lake. They eat nachos and pizza. I like those smells. Sometimes I smell sun loshon too.
Grade Level
Grade 3
Standards
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.2
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.5
Model Quality
Okay
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Completed Rubric
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Empty Rubric
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Mode
Explanatory Writing
Rubric Image Path
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Form
Description
Interactive Rubric

Explanatory Rubric

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Structure

The writing . . .

  • begins by introducing the topic and telling what the writing will be about.
  • includes a middle part that explains different parts of the topic.
  • organizes ideas effectively.
  • ends by restating an important idea or sharing what you learned.

Ideas

  • explains an interesting topic.
  • gives specific details about different parts of the topic.
  • uses specific words.
  • uses a variety of sentence lengths and beginnings.

Conventions

  • uses end punctuation correctly.
  • capitalizes first words and proper nouns.
  • spells names and key words correctly.

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