A Sad Day

By Anonymous (not verified), 16 March, 2026
A Sad Day I asked my mom if we could get a pet. We got a parakeat. One day it flew out the window. I was sad. I cried and cried.
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Narrative Rubric

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Structure

The writing . . .

  • begins with action or a very brief explanation.
  • describes the events and actions of the story in the middle part.
  • organizes the events in an easy-to-follow manner.
  • ends with a final action or final thought.

Ideas

  • includes all the important actions and details.
  • uses sensory details to describe how things look, sound, smell, or taste.
  • uses specific verbs to describe action (sprint instead of ran).
  • includes personal feelings.
  • includes dialogue between characters.
  • includes sentences that are easy to read and understand.

Conventions

  • is free of most errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
  • uses quotation marks around dialogue.

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