Assessment Models

This third-grade persuasive paragraph focuses on the policy of snow days.

This poor literary analysis has some interesting ideas but needs much more development.

In this model, a 2nd grader reviews McBungle Down Under.

This third-grade descriptive paragraph uses strong verbs and colorful adjectives to describe horses.

The middle school writer of this explanatory essay explores paper recycling.

This narrative tells of a local protest to make positive change in the writer's community.

In this explanatory essay, a third-grade writer explains how to plant a garden.

This example of second-grade persuasive writing tells people to treat others well.

A middle school student provides a few details about a police officer in this biographical essay.

This middle school research report focuses on poodles.

This effective analysis for Advanced Placement Statistics draws data from government Web sites to determine correlations between income level and voting preferences.

This good analysis draws data from government Web sites to determine statistical correlations between income, race, and voting preferences.