Using Hydrochloric Acid (Poor)

By Anonymous (not verified), 16 March, 2026
Hcl Hyrochronic acid is real dangerus. But don’t worry if you keep it in bottles and wear glovs, you’ll be okay. If you spill it, rinse it real good. When your teacher makes you dillut it, poor the water into the acid!!! If you got some left over, just poor it careful down the drain. Then don’t worry!!! Now you can take care of safe acid, with my help!
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Workplace Writing Rubric

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Title:

Ideas

The writing . . .

  • has a clear, central message.
  • provides details that support the central message.

Organization

  • begins by capturing the reader’s interest and introducing the message.
  • develops the message in the middle paragraphs.
  • ends by reviewing the message or making a call to action.

Voice

  • sounds knowledgeable and informed.
  • speaks in a voice appropriate to the audience.

Word Choice

  • uses precise nouns and active verbs.

Sentence Fluency

  • uses a variety of sentence lengths and beginnings.
  • flows smoothly from one sentence to another.

Conventions

  • uses end punctuation and commas correctly.
  • correctly capitalizes first words and proper nouns.
  • avoids spelling errors.
  • correctly uses words (there, they’re, their).
  • follows the correct format for the type of message.

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