My Lost Puppy

By Anonymous (not verified), 16 March, 2026
My Lost Puppy I got a puppy for my birthday. My puppy is black, it’s a boy. It sleep’s on a little rug. One time he ran under the couch. we didn’t know that until I found him. He was scared. Then it was time for school. I didn’t want to go.
Grade Level
Grade 3
Standards
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.3
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.5
Model Quality
Okay
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Completed Rubric
/sites/default/files/2026-03/My_Lost_Puppy_Rubric.docx
Empty Rubric
/sites/default/files/2026-03/Narrative_Rubric.docx
Mode
Narrative Writing
Rubric Image Path
/sites/default/files/2026-03/My_Lost_Puppy_Rubric_0.jpg
Form
Personal Narrative
Interactive Rubric

Narrative Rubric

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Structure

The writing . . .

  • begins with action or a very brief explanation.
  • describes the events and actions of the story in the middle part.
  • organizes the events in an easy-to-follow manner.
  • ends with a final action or final thought.

Ideas

  • includes all the important actions and details.
  • uses sensory details to describe how things look, sound, smell, or taste.
  • uses specific verbs to describe action (sprint instead of ran).
  • includes personal feelings.
  • includes dialogue between characters.
  • includes sentences that are easy to read and understand.

Conventions

  • is free of most errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
  • uses quotation marks around dialogue.

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