Let Us Eat

By Anonymous (not verified), 16 March, 2026
Let Us Eat We should be able to eat in the classroom because it’s too hard sitting in your seat looking out the window for hours with nothing to eat or nothing to chew. Just think about it. Your looking out and all of a sudden you see a person eating a big red apple or something else and drinking something cold and maybe a lemonade. Your mouth waters. Oh how you wish it was you, so you start wiggling in your seat. Now is this any way to act in school? If we could eat it would be a quite day because our mouths would be full. I’m sure the teachers would like this too. Its also good to learn to share treats, and that’s good, right? So its just plane fun to eat in our school.
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Argument Rubric

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Structure

The writing . . .

  • begins by introducing the topic and stating an opinion about it.
  • supports the opinion in the middle part.
  • focuses on one main supporting reason in each middle paragraph.
  • ends by restating the opinion and calling readers to action.

Ideas

  • provides a clear, effective opinion statement.
  • provides a variety of reasons and strong evidence to support the opinion.
  • sounds sincere and knowledgeable.
  • uses precise nouns and active verbs.

Conventions

  • uses end punctuation and commas correctly.
  • correctly capitalizes first words and proper nouns.
  • avoids spelling errors.
  • correctly uses words (there, they’re, their).

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