Editing Process Essays
After making big changes to improve your process essay, you need to make little changes (editing) to correct any remaining errors. You'll look for problems with sentences, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, usage, and spelling. The following activities will help you edit your writing.
Editing Command Sentences
Commands usually start with verbs.
Clean the cage. Change the bedding. Fill the bottle.
What about a subject? Commands have implied subjects: you.
(You) Clean the cage. (You) Change the bedding. (You) Fill the bottle.
Watch the video "Command Sentences."
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Change statements to commands.
In the following statements, cross out “you” and helping verbs to create commands. Change capitalization as needed. The first one has been done for you.
Create commands.
In your essay, make some regular sentences into commands if they make your ideas clearer.
Editing for the Right Word
Some words sound the same but have different meanings and spellings.
Hold your hamster until you’re comfortable with it.
- Your is “owned by you”
- You’re is a contraction of “you are”
They’re nervous at first until they trust their owners.
- They’re is a contraction of “they are”
- Their is “owned by them”
It’s important for a hamster to gnaw wood to keep its teeth healthy.
- It’s is a contraction of “it is”
- Its is “owned by it”
When these word have apostrophes (’), they are contractions. When they don’t, they show ownership.
Watch the video "Using the Right Word."
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Choose the right word.
Circle the correct word in parentheses. The first one has been done for you.
Edit for the right word.
Read your essay, paying attention to every time you use your/you’re, their/they’re, or its/it’s. Make sure you have used the correct form.
Editing in Action
When you edit, you check to make sure your essay is correct.
Edit with a checklist.
Read each line. When you can answer each question with a yes, check it off.
Checking Grammar and Usage
- Do command sentences help explain the process?
- Are words used correctly (your/you’re, their/they’re, its/it’s)?
- Are may, might, must, and other helping verbs used correctly?
- Are prepositional phrases used well?
- Are sentences complete (no fragments or run-ons)?
Checking Capitalization, Punctuation, and Spelling
- Are the first words in sentences capitalized?
- Are proper names of people, places, and things capitalized?
- Do commas and quotation marks set off quotations?
- Do compound sentences have commas before and, but, or or?
- Are words correctly spelled?
Publishing Process Essays
When you publish your process essay, you make it public, sharing it with others. First, you need to make a clean final copy of your work. Then you should find ways to share what you have written with classmates, your teacher, your family, and your friends.
Publishing a Final Copy
Create a final copy of your writing.
Include your revising and editing changes and read over your work a final time. (If you are working on a computer, spell-check your work.)
Reflecting on Your Writing
Reflect on your writing.
Complete the following form to think about what you learned.





