Writing a Comparison-Contrast Essay
You've chosen two topics to compare and contrast, conducted research about them, and created a working thesis statement. You're ready to draft your comparison-contrast essay. The following activities will help you build a strong beginning, develop middle paragraphs, and create an ending that effectively wraps up your essay.
Writing the Beginning Paragraph
The first sentence or two of your comparison-contrast essay needs to grab your reader's interest. You can experiment with a number of different strategies to write an effective lead.
Write a lead sentence.
Experiment with leads for your essay using each strategy below. Read the examples for ideas. Then choose your favorite lead to start your essay.
- Start with a fascinating question.
Would you rather be completely normal, with all the typical abilities and disabilities, or exceptional in one or two areas but impaired in others?
- Start with a thoughtful quotation.
"Nobody realizes that some people expend tremendous energy merely to be normal."
—Albert Camus
- Provide an anecdote.
We've all been stuck on a slow bus, starting and stopping in heavy traffic, crammed with others just waiting to get to a destination. When the patent clerk Albert Einstein was stuck on such a bus, he imagined instead riding on a photon at the speed of light . . . and came up with the Special Theory of Relativity.
- Make a shocking statement.
People with synesthesia process sound with the part of their brains meant to see pictures. As a result, they see music. When the rest of us hear a D major chord, they might see a bright blue mountain or a vibrantly orange rabbit.
Write your beginning paragraph.
Start with your lead, and then provide background information and develop a paragraph leading to your thesis statement.
Writing the Middle Paragraphs
Develop middle paragraphs that explain each of your topics and compare and contrast them. Start each paragraph with a topic sentence that names the main point. Thoroughly support each topic sentence using facts, statistics, examples, anecdotes, and other details that you gathered as you researched your topics. Use a voice that connects to your readers and shows your fascination with your topics.
Write your middle paragraphs.
Develop a paragraph of support for each main point about your thesis statement.
Teacher Tip
Allow students to develop these paragraphs first if they wish. Sometimes, students prefer to work from the details up to the thesis statement rather than in the reverse direction.
Writing the Ending Paragraph
Your ending paragraph draws your comparison-contrast essay to an effective close. You can develop this paragraph using a number of different ending strategies.
Try ending strategies.
Write a sentence for each ending strategy. Read the examples for ideas. Then consider using some or all of these sentences in your ending paragraph.
- Sum up the comparison and contrast.
The difference between those with Asperger's syndrome and those with savant syndrome is largely one of degree: How prodigious is the talent, and how deep is the disability coupled with it?
- Point out a key similarity.
The best hope for those with autism and savant abilities is to train the talent: Develop the area of special ability and, along the way, reduce the areas of disability.
- Use another powerful quotation.
People with Asperger's syndrome or savant syndrome often feel isolated from those around them, but they can turn their solitude into strength by pursuing their areas of special ability. As Albert Einstein put it, "I live in that solitude which is painful in youth, but delicious in the years of maturity."
- Connect to popular culture.
Peter Parker's Uncle Ben famously said, "With great power comes great responsibility," referring to his nephew's powers as the Amazing Spider-Man. That advice could be modified: "Use your great power to overcome your disability."
Write your ending paragraph.
Use some or all of the strategies you tried above as you build an ending paragraph for your comparison-contrast essay.
Reading a Comparison-Contrast Essay
Read a student sample.
As you read this draft, notice how the writer puts the parts together.
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Sample Comparison-Contrast Essay
Islands of Genius
Beginning Paragraph In Star Trek, Science Officer Spock is forever baffled by the illogical decisions of Captain Kirk and Dr. McCoy. His Vulcan logic simply cannot make sense of human emotions. However, Spock's prodigious intellect makes him an indispensable member of the team. Analogy Many people on the autism spectrum have the same experience, struggling to understand "neurotypicals" while excelling in fields of study that most people find incomprehensible. And the abilities of some autistic savants, who can perfectly play Tchaikovsky's First Piano Concerto after hearing it just once, seem superhuman to the rest of us. About 1 in 10 people on the autism spectrum have some savant abilities, but many others with savant abilities do not have autism at all. What is the difference between gifted people with high-functioning autism and those with savant skills? Thesis Statement Both Asperger's syndrome and savant syndrome describe people with unusual abilities coupled with unusual disabilities, but these conditions differ in terms of degree.
Middle Paragraphs The Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM-5) outlines two main criteria for Autism Spectrum Disorder: (1) persistent deficits in social communication and social interaction and Definition (2) restricted, repetitive patterns of behavior, interests, or activities ("Diagnostic"). In other words, people on the spectrum have difficulty understanding other people and have deep interests in specific areas of specialization. Like Mr. Spock, they may find the behavior of others to be baffling and may struggle to fit in socially while at the same time having interests and abilities well beyond those of their neurotypical peers. People with high-functioning autism, or Asperger's syndrome, have fewer social deficits than others with autism and often have higher IQ ("Asperger's"). They may be socially awkward but often have strong talents in reading, writing, music, or art, and they may have an encyclopedic knowledge of science, history, or another area of interest.
Topic Sentence About 1 in 10 people on the autism spectrum have such amazing talents that they are classified as savants. The DSM-5 does not specify a category for savant syndrome, though the condition has been recognized and studied since 1789. Darold A. Treffert, author of Extraordinary People, defined the syndrome in this way: "Savant syndrome is a rare, but extraordinary, condition in which persons with serious mental disabilities, including autistic disorder, have some ‘island of genius’ which stands in marked, incongruous contrast to overall handicap" (Treffert). Examples He points to the fictional character Raymond Babbitt from Rain Man, based on the true-life Kim Peek. Peek could simultaneously read the left-hand page in a book with his left eye and the right-hand page with his right eye, retaining 98 percent of the information. Peek had also memorized maps of every city in the United States and could give street-by-street driving instructions to reach any address (Brogaard). Stephen Wiltshire, another savant, took a helicopter ride over Rome and then spent three days drawing a five-and-a-half yard picture of what he had seen, down to each street and building. Overlaying a blueprint of the Colosseum on the drawing showed that his recollection of layout was astonishingly accurate (Treffert). Some savants can perfectly play a complex musical piece after hearing it just once, while others can instantly know the day of any date given to them throughout history. Dr. Benjamin Rush, the father of American psychiatry, described one of the earliest savants in Thomas Fuller, who had profound mental handicaps but could instantly calculate the number of seconds a person had lived: a man who was 70 years, 17 days, and 12 hours old had lived 2,210,500,800 seconds, even accounting for 17 leap years (Treffert). Each of these unique "splinter abilities" is rooted in a brain that remembers massive amounts of data and can access it at lightning speeds.
Causes/Effects What is happening in the brains of people with Asperger's syndrome or savant syndrome? In most cases, the person's brain works differently from a neurotypical brain. Contrasts MRI scans of those with Asperger's syndrome show increased blood flow in areas that regulate attention, which helps explain the tremendous focus of these individuals but also the tendency to become overstimulated. Scans also show decreased blood flow and fewer neurons in areas that control social interactions (Laino). In those with savant syndrome, the brain differences are more profound. Damage to neural wiring caused by birth defects, disease, or injury cause signals to be rerouted to areas ill-adapted to processing the information. In many savants, the left temporal lobe has been damaged, and the posterior neocortex has taken over the processing duties. In other cases, damage is even more pervasive. Kim Peek was missing his corpus callosum, the central structure that should have connected the two hemispheres of his brain (Treffert). Even adults who suffer brain injury can gain savant abilities as their brains reroute and rewire themselves to process the information in different locations. Using the "wrong" part of the brain for a specific task can cause pronounced disabilities but also can unlock intriguing savant abilities.
So, the difference between a person with Asperger's syndrome and a person with savant syndrome is largely one of degree. Both people use their brains differently from neurotypical peers, but the savant's brain is more profoundly affected. Both have a strong memory, though the savant's is often eidetic (photographic), with lightning access. Statistics Asperger's is common (1 in 88 people) while savant syndrome is rare (1 in 200,000 people without autism) (Treffert). But the difference isn't just one of degree. About 50 percent of savants do not have autism at all. Their neurologic damage comes from another condition or even injury. In 1994, Tony Cicoria was struck by lightning in a phone booth and afterward developed a savant ability not only to play music but to compose it, releasing a 2006 album titled Notes from an Accidental Pianist and Composer (Lammle).
Comparisons Despite their differences, Asperger's syndrome and savant syndrome both respond to a similar treatment strategy: train the talent. Focusing on developing the areas of disability is less successful than focusing on developing the area of ability. Fostering the person's talent helps the individual engage with others and generalize the learning to reduce areas of deficit. For example, allowing a person with Asperger's syndrome to pursue his fascination with trains lets him practice study skills, organization, resource management, and social skills such as attending special events or even organizing a train club. Allowing a savant to develop a specific skill helps the person move from imitation (drawing Rome) to improvisation (recombining different neighborhoods) to creation (drawing fantasy cities that have never existed). Along the way, the person makes social connections and gains a sense of self-worth (Treffert).
Ending Paragraph You've met four of the most famous savants: Kim Peek, Stephen Wiltshire, Thomas Fuller, and Tony Cicoria. You'd probably never heard of them before and will probably not remember them much after this reading. But how about a few famous people with Asperger's: Bill Gates, Dan Aykroyd, Tim Burton, Albert Einstein, Emily Dickinson, Isaac Newton? You've likely heard of them. That's because many people with Asperger's syndrome go on to great success, using their intense focus and intellect to excel in their chosen fields and overcome their social struggles. Applying savant abilities is more difficult. A person who has memorized the maps of all cities in the U.S. is amazing, but we have GPS. A person who can instantly calculate numbers is astonishing, but we have calculators. A person who can draw a scene with photographic accuracy is incredible, but we have cameras. In fact, our phones do all these things because of a person with Asperger's named Steve Jobs. Even so, the best hope for savants and those on the autism spectrum alike is to help them develop their areas of special ability. Let them use their abilities to overcome their disabilities. In fact, that's good advice for learners of all types.
Works-Cited Entries Works Cited
"Asperger's Syndrome." WebMD, 20 May 2018, https://www.webmd.com/brain/autism/mental-health-aspergers-syndrome.
Brogaard, Berit. "Kim Peek, the Real Rain Man." Psychology Today, 11 Dec. 2012, https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/the-superhuman-mind/201212/kim-peek-the-real-rain-man.
"Diagnostic Criteria." Autism Spectrum Disorder, Center for Disease Control and Prevention, 26 April 2018, https://www.cdc.gov/ncbddd/autism/hcp-dsm.html.
Laino, Charlene. "MRI Scans May Help Evaluate Asperger's Syndrome." WebMD, 6 Dec. 2010, https://www.webmd.com/brain/autism/news/20101206/mri-scans-may-help-evaluate-aspergers-syndrome.
Lammle, Rob. "The Amazing Stories of 6 Sudden Savants." Mental Floss, 29 June 2010, http://mentalfloss.com/article/25048/amazing-stories-6-sudden-savants.
Treffert, Darold A. "The savant syndrome: an extraordinary condition. A synopsis: past, present, future." Physical Transactions B, The Royal Society Publishing, 27 May 2009, https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2677584/.
Teaching Tip
Point out that this model contains many different types of elements, arranged to lead readers through the comparison and contrast. After introducing the two topics in the beginning paragraph, the writer provides definitions, examples, and explanations of each. Then she explores the causes and effects of each, showing those similarities and differences. Afterward, she contrasts the two conditions before focusing on their commonalities. Students also should select and arrange details to make their topics clear to readers.