4 | A consistent and purposeful focus and a strong controlling idea make the writing very informative: • is focused, clear, and well supported • places the controlling idea in a solid context | An effective beginning, middle, and ending create completeness and unity: • strongly connects ideas using transitions • presents ideas in a logical progression throughout • connects to the reader in the beginning and achieves the purpose by the ending | Thorough support for the controlling idea includes a variety of details from various sources: • has complete, relevant, and well integrated support, giving credit to sources • elaborates ideas effectively | Precise language makes the writing clear and effective: • has appropriate vocabulary for the subject, audience, and purpose | A strong command of conventions makes the writing polished and clear: • uses words well and forms sentences correctly • has correct punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and grammar |
3 | An adequate, general focus with a controlling idea makes the writing informative: • is mostly maintained, but with some loosely related material • provides adequate context for the controlling idea | A beginning, a middle, and an ending exist, making the writing complete, though some material may be loosely related: • connects ideas with some transitions • progresses through ideas • adequately introduces ideas in the beginning, and adequately sums them up in the ending | Support for the controlling idea includes details from different sources: • uses some support from sources, with general or imprecise credit • elaborates on some ideas | Some precise and some general language adequately communicates • has generally appropriate vocabulary for the subject, audience, and purpose | Adequate command of conventions makes the writing solid: • has occasional usage or sentence errors, but they do not disrupt meaning • has adequate punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and grammar |